UFS 211 TASK 10

FOLKLORE STORY

'ANDE-ANDE LUMUT' 

A long time ago, there was two Kingdom, Banyuarum Kingdom and Janggala Kingdom who wished to unites their kingdom through marriages of their children. Prince Kusumayuda and Princess Dewicandrakirana who had fallen in love with each other. One day, when the Queen met the King in the palace, the maiden of the Princess came and told the Queen that the Princess was lost in the Magical Forest. The Prince and his guard find the Princess in every place in the Kingdom and the forest but failed. While finding a way out from the Magical Forest, the Princess fell and she was found by a village people in Dadapan Village named Mbok Rondo. Mbok Rondo helped the Princess by adopt her as her daughter.After many years had passed, living with her adopted family, without knowing it was a Princess who lived with Mbok Rondo's family, they named her as Kleting Kuning just like her three eldest sister, Kleting Merah the eldest who are smarter, Kleting Biru who are best in cook and Kleting Hijau who knows how to sing and dance. But unfortunately the three eldest sister hate Kleting Kuning because of her beauty, kindness and softness. They bullied Kleting kuning as they told her to wash clothes and cook for them. Therefore, even after many years had passed, the Prince would never forget about his loves one. Hoping to meet the Princess again, he went out to the Magical Forest and being seperated with his guard finally they collided together at the same place where the Princess has been found by Mbok and there the Prince heard a voice coming from the lake and he went down to see who's voices is that. At the lake, he saw Kleting Kuning and her three other of her sister. The Prince seems to know Kleting Kuning but he hestitate it and a brilliant idea come out from his mind to fake his identity and be one of a rich man named Ande-Ande Lumut in the village. The Prince told his guard to spread a news about he's finding a wife to all women who lived in Dadapan Village. Mbok Rondo who heard about the news quickly tell her three daughter to be dressed beautifully. Every girl who lived in Dadapan village tried to apply for his wife but failed. Even Kleting Merah, Kleting Biru and Kleting Hijau wanted so much to be his wife but in order to go to Ande-Ande Lumut's house, they may cross a river which has been take care by Yuyu Kangkang, a crab who had been curse, stingy, smelly, ugly and bad and Yuyu KangKang will help them but it asked something in returned 'a kiss for them '. So finally they manage to cross the river they met Ande-Ande Lumut but he refused every girl who applying to be his wife. Except for Kleting Kuning, she did not want to turn up but a magical parrot asked her to go to Ande-Ande Lumut house to find her true love. So Kleting asked if she can go together with her sister but Mbok Rondo will let her go if she dressed like a maid and bring together her broom. Kleting Kuning arrived late to cross the river but she is smarter than her eldest sister, she refused to kiss Yuyu KangKang and Yuyu KangKang become angry and about to eat her, Kleting Kuning hit him with her Magical Broom and manage to cross the river. Finally, she went to Ande-Ande Lumut house and being chosen by the Prince. After a long talk they had, The Prince suddenly know that it was her long lost love he had met. The Prince discover Kleting Kuning with her mother. At the end of this story, the Prince propose the Princess to be his wife and they lived happily ever after.

UFS 211 TASK 9

'LIE DETECTOR'

Lie detector is a technology which detects and functions to ascertain false and falsehood in response. It can be used without a subject's knowledge and mostly used by private industry for pre-employment screening, investigating thefts, and even periodic staff checks. It's normally understood that it's voice generation mechanism-vibrations of the vocal chords and resonance of cavities inside the head. Dektor claims that the muscle tightening occurs very quickly, and can change from one word to the next so it is possible to pick out a word or phrase that caused stress. In the meanwhile, the device is used for pre-employment interviews so that they can investigate possibly suspicious behaviour. Finally, the device also can be used to probe a whole range of personal issues totally like union and political affiliations.

UFS 211 TASK 8

The story of 'CAST AWAY' is about one man named Chucks Noland as an employee of Fedex who is a time-obsessed stranded at one island. He's on his way to Malaysia but unfortunately on his way in to Malaysia, they had a plane crash which makes him washes on to the shore of a small tropical island. He tried in to escape with the rubber raft he found but failed. So he lived in the ocean  with the basic need in his life, survival, water, food and shelter. Shortly, he uses all items that he found in the Fedex boxes such as the sharp end of a pair or ice skates serve as an ax. He found a friend for him, a volleyball which he called it Wilson to be his companion. About four years being stranded in a small island, he soon began to live in the island. Until one day he build a raft to sail and escape from the island. He bring his companion Wilson and the last unopened Fedex parcel with a pair of wing. In the way of his effort, he loose his Wilson and being founded by a large ship that rescue him. After four weeks hoping to see his beloved girlfriend Kelly, finally he found out that his girlfriend married with his dentist and have their own children. How he confess with his friend about losing so much things in his past life that taught him to find a new life. Lastly he drove to north to find who's owner for the last unopened Fedex parcel with a pair of wing. At the end of this story, he finally know where is the next destiny for him to continue his life, he followed the women's truck (the owner of the last unopened parcel)to the north.

As for me, if I were Chuck, I will not know how to continue my life being alone and stranded at the island. Maybe I will be like chuck, try everything to survive and become like him and secondly, if I were Chuck when I'm not a strong person I will just give up and suicide rather than being alone in the island but that's  what I will do if i experiencing the same situation like him.

UFS 211 TASK 7

'PARAGRAPH WRITING'

Topic : My Unforgettable Childhood Memory

Topic Sentence :  There's a lot of childhood memories I could remember until now. 

Supporting Details :

• When I was a little girl, I used to be called 'tomboy' especially among the boys, I mean my childhood friends.
• I do have my tomboy gang
• I joined a Children Beauty Contest

Conclusion :   To be sure, that's how it should be when a tomboy turned to be a girl.

Linker/ Sequence connectors used : Since, To be sure

'My Unforgettable Childhood Memory'

There's a lot of childhood memories I could remember until now. Too many stories but I choose this one to share with you. When I was a little girl, I used to be called 'tomboy' especially among the boys, I mean my childhood friends.So every time I met my friend in church, I would played with my friend. Running there and playing hide and seek. Even when my parents angry, I won't listen to them. Sometimes, the boys always make fun of my personality. They called me "eee tomboy is coming". Even when I dressed I would dressed like a boy. long-sleeves t-shirt printed 'Authentic' and knee-length pants that would be my favorite. I do have my 'Tomboy Gang'. We always hang out together and played together no matter where we go and what we do.And one day, maybe my mom worried so much about my personality, I dressed like a tomboy, I walked like a boy, I played boy's games. I bullied other kids. I don't like Barbie at all. So she put me in children beauty contest. I always refused and went hiding by climbing up a big tree behind of my house. But my mom knows how to comfort me and nicely she asked me to join the contest. Finally, I just followed just like what she have said. It's about 3-4 times I've participate the contest, and about 3 contest I've won. It was fun to experience a children beauty contest and that's actually helped me to change my personality. To be sure, that's how it should be when a tomboy turned to be a girl. 

UFS 211 TASK 6

"The Common Mistakes, Difficulty in Writing, Kind of Problem to face in Writing, Suggestions to overcome the problem."

I always repeat the same mistakes when writing in English. Especially when it comes to present tense sentence and past tense sentence. I found it confusing and sometimes I did not put it in the correct place when writing. At the same time, I will mix up my essay with the present tense and past tense. Without practices and learning, I do find difficulty in writing but as I work hard on improving my skill, actually it's not that hard for me to write in English. In fact, student will say that writing in English is so difficult but of course we will say that if we don't learn to make it easy. I have a few kinds of problem that I always face in writing, firstly is i'm out of ideas. I cannot write if there is no such a good idea that I can think about and this problem always disturb me when writing. Secondly, I always waste my time on reading and editing one by one of the paragraph that I write even when I haven't finish with my writing. Moreover, sometimes I did repeat the same linker which is not suitable for a certain paragraph. But overall I did find a way on how to overcome such problems that I faces when writing, I did a lot of research, read books and novels, keep on writing in English and sometimes I do blogging in English to be more in fluently especially in English language so when I did a lots of reading I will have an inspirations and ideas to start my writing in easy way. From time to time, I keep learning to write the whole paragraph without checking the errors and just continually writing so that at the end of writing, I will spend my time to edit my paragraph without wasting time at the beginning of writing. Linker is everywhere to find in internet and book so I always do research about it and learn which suitable sentences can be used to put a different linker in my paragraph. Every now and then , to write a good paragraph I always start with writing down my ideas and inspiration based on the topic given so it's easy for me to begin my essay.

UFS 211 TASK 5

" WATER POLLUTION"

Topic Sentence : Pollution is an issue of concern in the modern world that we live in today.

Supporting Sentence :
There are many types of pollution, namely air, water and noise.
Pollution in our environment will undoubtedly affect our quality of life
Pollution can also cause various health problems and other negative effects.

Concluding Sentence : Lets hands on hands together by recycle and conserve the world for the better future.

Linker Used : Nowadays, Besides, Moreover, Another

Pollution is an issue of concern in the modern world that we live in today. There are many types of pollution, namely air, water and noise. Pollution in our environment will undoubtedly affect our quality of life. Our naturally beautiful world becoming ugly because it is suffering from the effects of environmental pollution. Pollution can also cause various health problems and other negative effects. Air pollution is caused by the emission of toxic gases from vehicles, factories and open burning. Nowadays, there are more and more vehicles on the road as society gets more affluent. Another example of contributor to the air pollution is the manufacturing factories. Besides factories, many people are still practicing open burning as a way of disposing their household wastes. Moreover, Water pollution is also a problem that we are currently facing.The marine life is the first to suffer from water pollution as they depend on the nutrients in the water to survive.Noise pollution is another form of pollution. Noise from heavy machinery and vehicles can cause hearing problems and in extreme cases, deafness.We must work together to reduce pollution so that the future generations can live in a healthy, unpolluted environment. As the saying goes, precaution is better than cure. Lets hands on hands together by recycle and conserve the world for the better future.

UFS 211 TASK 4

Topic sentence

Based on my own words.

 There are about 6 stages of writing process. Firstly is getting ideas and inspiration, secondly Drafting, thirdly Revising, Fourth stages is Editing, fifth Proofreading, lastly Presenting.


But a good paragraph will include topic sentences, supporting sentences and concluding sentences.


A good topic sentence will tell the reader know what the story is about. A topic sentence tell the main point of the whole paragraph and supporting sentence to support the topic sentence with details and examples as proof of the topic sentence's point.


Example :
Money causes teenagers to feel stress. It makes them feel bad about themselves and envy other people. My friend, for instance, lives with her family and has to share a room with her sister, who is very cute and intelligent. This girl wishes she could have her own room and have a lot of stuff, but she can’t have these things because her family doesn’t have much money. Her family’s income is pretty low because her father is old and doesn’t go to work. Her sister is the only one who works. Because her family can’t buy her the things she wants, she feels a lot of stress and gets angry sometimes. Once, she wanted a beautiful dress to wear to a sweetheart dance. She asked her sister for some money to buy the dress. She was disappointed because her sister didn’t have money to give her. She sat in silence for a little while and then started yelling out loud. She said her friends got anything they wanted but she didn’t. Then she felt sorry for herself and asked why she was born into a poor family. Not having money has caused this girl to think negatively about herself and her family. It has caused a lot of stress in her life.

So the topic sentence for this paragraph : Money causes teenagers to feel stress.

A good topic sentence is always support by the supporting sentence:
It makes them feel bad about themselves and envy other people. My friend, for instance, lives with her family and has to share a room with her sister, who is very cute and intelligent. This girl wishes she could have her own room and have a lot of stuff, but she can’t have these things because her family doesn’t have much money. Her family’s income is pretty low because her father is old and doesn’t go to work. Her sister is the only one who works. Because her family can’t buy her the things she wants, she feels a lot of stress and gets angry sometimes. Once, she wanted a beautiful dress to wear to a sweetheart dance. She asked her sister for some money to buy the dress. She was disappointed because her sister didn’t have money to give her. She sat in silence for a little while and then started yelling out loud. She said her friends got anything they wanted but she didn’t. Then she felt sorry for herself and asked why she was born into a poor family. Not having money has caused this girl to think negatively about herself and her family. It has caused a lot of stress in her life.

Lastly, a paragraph must have Concluding Sentence that wraps up the whole point of the paragraph.

And the concluding sentence for this paragraph : It has caused a lot of stress in her life.